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Miss Mintons perspective to Journey to the River Sea


Miss Minton’s perspective to Journey to the River Sea.

As Maia approached the old vintage cab I caught a glimpse of her long silky hair. My mouth was as dry as a desert when Maia casually strolled closer to the taxi! It was the coldest day of the year so far but I had to introduce myself to Maia. I leaped out of the cart and explained “Hello, young Maia I hope you are in high spirits because I am your governess that will take you to your destination”!

One slow three weeks had past and I was on the border of the Amazon Rainforest. Maia was paranoid due to never seeing or speaking to the Carters. Surprisingly no one was here to greet us, as we approached the cottage, now slowly walking Maia’s disappointment was written all over herself.

We had to now welcome yourself because no one came to welcome us. Strolling down the dull corridor no one took notice of us so then we got told to go to the dirty rooms while dinner was cooking in the hot oven by Miss Minton because they were hungry.

After a short period of time, tea was sat on the broken wooden table as everyone was staring at us like we were zombies. Maia mumbled to me “This is like half of the dinner I used to have when my mum and dad were alive. “There was no answer!

I woke up to the twins bickering about Maia and her piano lessons with me, Miss Minton! Abruptly I slowly strolled out of bed like a snail to try and change the convocation. Tired and paranoid, I quickly set up there room ready for the lesson while everyone was ignoring me! Ten minutes had past and they’re ready to learn some important steps to play the piano.

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2 Comments to

“Miss Mintons perspective to Journey to the River Sea”

  1. June 3rd, 2015 at 2:30 pm      Reply Eleana and Nancy Says:

    Great work but next time write your name 🙁

  2. June 3rd, 2015 at 2:31 pm      Reply Eleana and Nancy Says:

    Keep it up! 🙂 😉

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