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The New York Mystery

June3

Have you ever felt like flying through the sky ? Seven years later and I was on my way to New York! What am I doing here ? How did I get on the plane ? I was flying through the sky like a bird with Aunt Gloria by my side the hole time . I didn’t know what was going on !!…

Rain was pouring down on the steaming windows of the plane meanwhile me worrying about what could be happening . Aunt Gloria was fast asleep like a slof however she was saying “you have got a new sister “. Shockingly, I didn’t know if this was true or not but I hoe it isn’t !!…Or is it …

Like a kangaroo , I leaped out of the huge plane to the fresh air of New York City! Supriesingly,dad and my new sister was impatiently waiting outside of the airport,she had long silky hair which blue in the soft cool breeze . I was incredibly jealous of her. She is the most beautiful person I have ever met !

My dad! I hardly ever see him but today he wanted to. My sister (Mandy) could NOT stop talking,she is someone who would tell you your whole life story. Would you like a sister ?

One week later, and I was in my room writing this diary with my sister. Amazingly, we have only had two arguments ( over the best room in the mansion ) however I thought we would have more! Now I wish that I could have a sister earlier !!! I hope Ted can be here aswell to join in with all of the fun we are having I New York .

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“The New York Mystery”

  1. June 11th, 2015 at 12:07 pm      Reply Eleana Says:

    I love this story all of the description and punctuation Is really great keep it up! 😉 🙂


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