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100 word challenge by Eleana


Once on a sunny day, out in the wide blue sea, an old ship with a ripped sail and a broken canon floated on the rippling water. Aboard that ship was a grumpy mean pirate who was nobody’s friend. I especially hate him. He’s the one that killed me. It was 1985 when he did it. He had stole my next door neighbours child and I saw him take her. The next day when my mum went out he snuck in. My life had been cut short and I have been haunting him ever since. He will never get away!

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6 Comments to

“100 word challenge by Eleana”

  1. June 18th, 2015 at 12:01 pm      Reply Kira Says:

    That’s really good Eleana

  2. July 16th, 2015 at 11:59 am      Reply Nancy Says:

    That is great keep up the good work. 🙂

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